Today we came to class with our work printed and ready for critique. The lecturers then came around and gave us feedback on each of our elements. They then spoke about hand-in requirements and what's involved in the presentation tomorrow.
The feedback we gained is as follows:
The flyer:
-change the linking line from the text to the image to be more chalky rather than a straight line.
- look at line weights and the text size
-check punctuation, like hyphenation and also spelling mistakes
-make your chalk images more chalky
-do a final check over everything before putting into printing format.
The Food truck:
Change the menu so that the rubbish species don't have visible brand logos on them
The Website:
Change the recipe rubbish species so that they don't have visible brand logos on them
Make sure you have the downloadable poster and flyer on the create event page.
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