Below is the feedback we got:
Poster:
- Make fish and chips brighter, change colouring
- Call to action bigger
- take out rule
- paragraph needs to relate to food
- hierarchy not obvious
- take out words under 'dig in'
- tie it all together
- look at food festival posters
Website:
- homepage needs work
- massive slogan
- powerful and bold
- 3 species in plastic?
- have a fish of the day?
- 'what are you craving'
- could put image from poster in
- fill in the gaps after seeing the poster
- chopping board could be used
Truck:
- replace 'fish' with 'seafood' on menu
- menu-make fish real?
- rework paragraph on menu
- put thanks first
Booklet:
- hierarchy
- play with fonts
What we got most from the feedback is that we need to keep refining and tie it all in together. We need to make sure our info is food related too.
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